Sandman theme essay
Now the reason I chose the editing or rewriting feature is because I am providing the writer with sentence stems. Shows how to start each sentence.

The question in this essay is
How does the director use events to show key ideas?

The theme of this essay is
A boys perspective of going to Bed

1. Use the templates and choose the appropriate stem.
The instructions are clearly shown on the attachment

2. Evidence needs to be clear and specific and you need to explain what each evidence tells us. be very specific on the techniques used by the director

3. The technique part is the canera techniques such as diegetic sound, non diegetic sound, low camera angles etc

Pick 6 pieces of evidence that relates to the theme provided, 2 evidence/technique/explain in each paragraph.

The critical thinking is about the real world, how children feel about going to bed in the real world (Not the film)

Use the stems dont change

Only write the body paragraphs x3

dont use all the stems only one