Gender Studies
I know this is a very rough draft. I really have no idea how to connect my essay to the points my instructor indicates. We have to use the terms (which is attached) in our essay and connect them to our points and how those shape the person I am right now. There is also a paper guideline (attached) which was gave by my instructor, and we have to follow her guideline. There is one response (attached) from my instructor after she read my first paragraph. I made a few changes on it, but still struggling. Please rewrite it based on the draft I have right now, for the other, you can just make it up for me.

for the first part, I indicated that I wanted to be a boy when I was a kid, but turns out I shift back to a girl right now. I figured that it is so hard to explain, and would be too long to explain it in my essay, cuz it is unrelated to the point i raise in my essay. My brother influenced me a lot when I was a kid, which makes me want to be a boy, who can wear pants all the time and not wear dresses. When I became a teenager, I look exactly like a boy with my height (5’8, considered to be tall among Asians). But I always know like I like boys, too. I always said that I would be gay if I was as a boy. And maybe this is one of the reasons I shifted back. Gay is more difficult to find a partner. not sure if my brother would be a good compare example on it? he studied econ and working in a finance filed. the difference how my parents raise him and me really made a difference of how i am right now. For my brother, they would send him to learn sports, like soccer. for me, dancing, drawing.
not sure how to relate something/someone back to 50 years ago cuz we need to. we need to compare how (maybe different gender) people changes in these 50 years. would you life have been different if you had been born 50 years earlier? <<please write something answering this question.

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