Argumentative Essay-No research allowed

The thesis is: College freshmen should be required to enter college with a minimum of one year of part-time job behind them.

Please have good transition between paragraphs.

Introduction- commonpoint- oppositionpoint1+rebuttal -oppositionpoint2+rebuttal- reason1- reason2- reason3- conclusion

1. Introduction Paragraph ( need include all following requirements)
2. A hook (Attention Getter is IMPORTANT). Your first sentence is comprised of a a “hook” It’s a sentence that grabs the attention and interest from readers.
3. Background information: The next part of your intro is dedicated to offering some detailed background information on your topic.

Try answering the following questions:

What is the topic? Who cares? Where is this issue prevalent? Why is it important?

1. State there are some different opinion about this topic( but don’t specify what opinion is)
2. Thesis statement
3. How will you appeal Ethos in this paragraph?
4. Establish a common ground ( point in common): an opposition point that you also agree on. A common ground can write in the introduction or you can write a single paragraph.
5. Two opposition points and two rebuttal for each opposition point. ( You need to provide more persuasive evidence than the opponents )
6. ( one paragraph) a.The first opposition point: a part-time job before college would make a college freshmen lose the motivation to go to school. If a student gets a job immediately after high school, he will concentrate more on making money rather than keep on studying.
7. Your rebuttal to the opposition point: .Part-time job serves as an eye-opener, which makes an employee realize where he is weak, and then he will be motivated to put more effort in his future college education. Then Example and details. 2. Students can realize they can’t earn the much same money as those students who are college-level education, so they will be motivated to go to school. Then Example and details.
8. (one paragraph) a. The second opposition point: a part-time job experience would make students form bad habits such as drinking alcohol and taking drugs, which will affect their future college education negatively.These things are usually common for people who are stressed from work, and they need something to relax.
9. Your rebuttal to the opposition point: 1. However, part-time employees only have to work approximately 20 hours per week so they don’t have lots of work stress that lead to alcohol and drugs. Then examples or details. 2. Students will learn to avoid these risky behaviors because they have to understand the responsibility of being a qualified workers. Then example or details.
10. Three evidence ( Three paragraph )to support your thesis (must include logos and pathos)

1^st Reason: a part-time employment will get students thinking about selecting their future major.

1. Details or example
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3. Details or example

2 Reason : would offer students financial stability in their college life.

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3 Reason: taking a part-time job would be an excellent opportunity to learn how to communicate and get along with others from different backgrounds

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6. Thoughtful- provoking Conclusion