Make sure to read notes on attached document (Research Paper Proposal).

Instructor Comments: Good start but some of your terms/words are a bit over the top. Remember you are writing this for others to read so needs to be easily understood. Some of your sources are not very specific either. Take a look at my example in the announcements to see how to structure one properly.

– The title “Running head” should be on your title page prior to your short title and the “h” in “head” is not capped.  Also make sure it is in the same font as the rest of the proposal

– The abstract is not indented like a paragraph

– The template is very specific about the information that is required to be included in the abstract, statement of the project and introduction so please follow it!  (no need to list all of the program outcomes individually in the statement of the project just write you will demonstrate all 11 program outcomes)

– With the exception of the title page all spacing should look exactly the same, many have to many spaces between program outcomes and between other sections

– You must spell out all acronyms the first time and then just use the acronym by itself after this

– Program Outcomes:

– Make sure it is clear where your objective 1 ends and your objective 2 starts.

– Do your best to make most, if not all, of your information “topic specific” meaning something like “will analyze data to determine specific outcomes”  tells me nothing.  However if you write “will analyze how specific aircraft deal with emergency conditions to determine if pilot training is adequate” this tells me exactly how you plan to demonstrate.

– Data and information is not specific; training records and operating characteristics is

– FAA, NTSB, etc. are not specific sources; FAA website for pilot training is