I need to have this paper proofread, edited and add any suggestions based on the paper. here are the professors comments back:

“Anyway this is a good draft; You need to go back and edit it — I already did quite a bit. You didn’t even put a hypothesis? You need to use graduate level words — the “breakdown” of the data and the “connection” is not appropriate for a capstone paper nor is it anything you should have found in your journals.

Additionally, in your tables please refer to the actual question from the survey not the variable in the data — that is meaningless to the reader. Where is the table of ALL the questions you used in the analysis you were supposed to do and put in the paper? You also have incomplete sentences in the results section. and are missing %’s in the age distribution.

You are missing a discussion of the results section and only 2 pages after all this work seems to be a bit of a disappointment.

Please let me know when you think you can get this back to me AFTER YOU HAVE HAD A LEAST 2 OTHER PEOPLE READ IT.”

This paper is complete i just need someone to help me clean it up based on the recommendations above and maybe add any additional suggestions and or extend the the results section of my paper in the end discussion. please let me know if you can do the work. Thanks also this is editing a document that is basically edited for the most part so the work is not extensive, its more minimal. looking for lowest cost…