Your essay is headed in the right direction. It will need a proper title, of course, and the summary of the seasons is not appropriate for a scholarly audience. Assume they know the show already. What larger idea about the show are you trying to convey to readers? How do the smaller points you make add up to something larger?

You might consider reading this essay to see how one writer makes sense of this TV show. While it’s not written for an academic audience, per se, it’s still intelligently and thoughtfully crafted and can serve as a model for your own work: http://www.thenervousbreakdown.com/lbogart/2013/08/anything-less-than-extraordinary-breaking-bad-and-american-ambition/

Finally, your sources are appropriate, though you might need a few more. However, the audience also doesn’t need you to tell them what a literature analysis is—skip that introduction and get rid of that source.

With the deadline extended for this project, you now have a chance to complete a revision and still meet with the writing center once more before it’s due.